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Blog Entries:
Farewell to Hans Kasten, a Friend
  Posted on 09/30/2007 07:06 AM
FELL, THE BURDENED WALL
  Posted on 07/04/2007 02:33 AM
CONSCIENCE
  Posted on 05/23/2007 12:56 AM
SUCH IS THE EMBARRASSMENT
  Posted on 01/19/2007 10:06 PM
RICHER THAN THE KINGS
  Posted on 11/26/2006 11:14 PM
ABSOLUTE, THE ETERNAL TRASHCAN
  Posted on 10/18/2006 12:06 AM
THE CROSSES WE BEAR
  Posted on 10/17/2006 11:51 PM
DETRITUS OF HUMAN FAILURE
  Posted on 10/05/2006 12:55 AM
THE WRETCHED REFLECTIONS
  Posted on 08/15/2006 04:00 AM
FELL, THE BURDENED WALL

 

I stared and stared at a very blank wall,

Till strange writings formed that I could not read;

I tried and tried to understand it all,

But I failed and failed, yet I learned to teach;

I taught what I thought I had understood

To those who understood what I could see;

Thus, with Truth imagined, firmly we stood,

Singing songs of freedom and liberty;

Well we sang in united brotherhood

And thought the rest were completely off-key;

Till one day it fell, that mighty big wall,

Ever burdened with thought and literacy;

And we returned -- all the short and the tall,

Divorced from thought, but living happily!

 

From The Unsung Log by Ronnie Patel (copyright Ronnie Patel 2007)


  Posted on 07/04/2007 02:33 AM

1 Comments

Well thought out.

The wall of death
That prevented freedom
Yet gave it in the same breath.

Never stop writing poems Ronnie!
  Posted by sharoncthompson on 09/30/2007 03:02 PM